I finished my 2nd draft of my grant but it's a lot shorter than my first and rough draft. I feel like I should add something but I have no idea what to add. Hopefully today in class I can get some feedback. I cut out a lot of things to make it really seem feasible.
Also, since I don't have any new images of this specific project and found three from my essay project that I really like that I think emulate the style that I want to go for in the essay about military spouses etc.
Here they are:
Are you feeling better after yesterday's feedback?
ReplyDeleteYes I am actually. I didn't even know how much to elaborate or what exactly to add but now I feel like I know what I can put in.
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